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Thursday, July 9, 2009


Hello everyone,

Anyway, I'm not very certain of the plot skeleton, but Shanna has updated me already, so thanks much. I thought Shanna's suggestion on more characters is a good one, since we need involvement from everyone in this group. Also, I put forth my suggestion that there should be certain one-person scenes to show how this character is haunted. It could be a mute scene where a diary entry is read, which brings me to my next point.

If you guys want to end with a diary scene, it should be that the protagonist has consistantly been confiding in her diaries. So I was thinking along the lines about interception of the play here and then to recite the diary entries? It could be possible, and it would show development, because otherwise I think it's strange to end with a diary entry when the protagonist doesn't even write. Unless you guys want a letter? That would be different.

Yup, and lastly, I was thinking that I'd be interested to read the diary entries, if none of you objects to it of course. Reply soon(:

-Phoebe


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